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City Problems
With the increase people going to the big city,some problems occured.These problems are harm for the big city's improve as well as effect nation's peace and proprety.
The obvious problems are as follow.First,the bloom of people made the each people has less place to live.People's house is more narrow and seemed crowed.Second,there are not resionable medical service for the abundant people.This may arouse a serious of other problem such as the increasing of medical expense.Third,the luge people would be a threat to the peace and safe for the big city.
I think the related government department should be pay attention to the problem.Besides,some methods to it should be practicled as soon as possible.
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谢谢！我不太懂介词怎么用，结果就猜。哎，烦死了！
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其实你的英语也不是很差呀 你知道很多词汇就是不知道怎么用
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其实你的英语也不是很差呀 你知道很多词汇就是不知道怎么用
精灵宝贝最佳答案 - 由提问者2007-06-01 22:25:22选出
City Problems
With more and more people rushing into big cities,some problems occurred, which not only do harm to the city's development, but have negative effects on the nation's peace and prosperity.
The obvious problems are as follow.First,the boom of the population has made people have less space to live.Their houses become more crowded. Second, the society can not provide better medical service for most residents.This may cause another serious problems such as the increasing of medical expense.Third, the huge number of people will be a threat to the peace and safety of the big city.
I think the relative departments of the government should attach more importance to the problem and some measures should be taken as soon as possible.
提问者对最佳答案的评价
谢谢你哦！我开始还担心没人理我呢。错误太多了吧，呵呵。再次谢谢！
