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I need help on these words
I'm writing an essay under the topic "my ideal man."
First of all, is the quoted sentence below, I can't think of any good words that fits the meaning... can someone help me with the phrases? Also, if there's better ways to write this sentence, because it somehow sounds silly...?
"It maybe a stereotype, but I find it true that it's always the good looking guy who plays the playboy role since they have the basic 条件/本钱(指他们的长相) to be 花心. "
Secondly, this is an analysis paper. I don't know if it's practicable to use the word "I" in my essay. I thought someone had told me to never use first-person phrases in writing essays. Is it true though? Can someone confirm this?
Rock 哥最佳答案 - 由提问者2008-10-15 03:45:33选出
I won't used first person voice if I were writing the main part of analysis cos' you're suppose to report something base on facts and figures. Your opinion should comes in the later part of the closing as a summary.
Passive tone example :
It could be stereotype to think that beauty is only skin deep, but how in actual does a woman judge a man when she first met him. Undeniably good looks counts! And the best part of it, good looks do have an edges over the uglies. Playboys were made to use their charismatic nature to flirt and ruminates hearts of the females. Visual senses could turned into an obessession sometimes..something so inexplicable but yet seeing is always believing...
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thanks a lot for the answer.
especially the passive tone example ^.^
it really helps.
其他回答(2)
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1. My words:
Though it sounds silly, I still believe that many good-looking guys easily act as a playboy due to their attractive appearance to the women.
2. No such a taboo rule for using "I" in an essay, it is not recommended to use "I" in resume though.
An "I" in essay conveys direct thought which often comes with the dynamic power I always appreciate. -
A handsome boy is not necessarilly a playboy even if he has the basic conditions to be a playboy.
He has his advantages too, I think. Nature advantage inside .
Kris
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