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Dear:
You maybe suprise that I write this letter to you.But I have to do it.Because if I don't write this letter for you,you'll never realize me.Of course,I don't realize you is the same as you don't.But I think it's doesn't matter.I don't know you name but I can see your face everyday.Though you may not see me everyday.When did I firet meet you?I forget it.But I just remember how my heart happiness when I saw your face on that moment.That moment is a moment I treasure in my life.I knoe we're both in the important stage.I worry about that I will put you to trouble.So I even tried to forget you.But I couldn't.Because I hadn't fall asleep all the night when I tried to do it.Everyday I always look at the way to your home and want to find you when I go to school.Everyday I always stand against the window and want to find your tracks when your classmates are running in the schoolyard.Everyday I always look around and want to find you when I walk at the school.Do you understand what I mean?Now I just know you are the one who my heart and soul confided in.I just know you are the one who I've been seeking for.I just know you are the one who I've been dreaming of.Look into my eyes,you will see what you mean to me.I need you like I need the air to breathe.Wherever you go,whatever you do,I'll be right here waiting for you.I don't want to close my eyes.I don't want to fall asleep.Because I'd miss you.I don't want to miss a thing.Do you know?Everytime I look at your eyes.I always see something new.I just hope you can give me a chance,please.Trust me,please.I just want to be with you.
sincerely

确切的说这是我写的英语情书 对象是一个每天都见但是不认识更没有说过话的人
请大家帮忙修改 谢谢

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最佳答案 - 由投票者2008-10-22 23:32:02选出

如果对方是中国人,建议还是用中文写,否则她英语差或很好,你就可能失败(惨)了

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  • dreamhigh08@dreamhigh08@

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    maybe it is so suprise that you can receive my letter.if i did not write this letter to you,we would never know each other .although i have not known your name,i am happy to see you everyday .do you know when i first met you,how happy i felt.on that moment i told myself you were the one who i really waited in my whole life.i know that i can not tell me my feeling now,that is beause that i can not make trouble to you.study is very important for us.but i hardly forget you.i miss you every single night.you often appear in my dream.your smile,sadness,looking ,yes,they are all in my heart.do you know that feeling?perhaps i fall a love with you.i think it is not wrong thing for loving my girl.at least i am a honest man,i have a right to purchase my happiness.i am not sure what you will do after you read this.there is a saying :you do not know until you try.i am serious,trust me,ok?i am waiting for your reply.

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